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Poetic Thoughts - Two Japanese Forms - by C.W. Pruitt II
posted: Jan. 18, 2019

Two Japanese Forms
Haiku is a short ancient Japanese poetry form that is traditionally about nature. Beatnik poet Jack Kerouac popularized the haiku form in America. Etheridge Knight (from Indianapolis) was awesome at haiku.
As a poetic discipline, I wrote over 250 haikus from the Gospels in a six week period in 2002, Here is one of those haikus:
In the wilderness
Of human understanding
Ego was beaten
C.W. Pruitt II
August 20, 2002
Notice that the haiku form is 5-7-5 in terms of beats per line.
In 2003 I was talking to my poet/friend Richard Jones at CATH, Inc. He encouraged me to attempt a tanka. The tanka is an ancient Japanese form which begins with a 5-7-5 haiku. It ends with two 7 beat lines that are meant to shed light on the haiku above it.
I asked Richard to suggest a passage in the Bible which contained imagery of nature. (Richard is also a theologian). He turned to Isiah 55:12-13. Immediately the words of the prophet formed a tanka in my mind. Here is what I came up with:
Go with joy and peace
Mountains break into singing
Trees shall clap their hands
Nothing sharp is left to hurt us
Everlasting sign of Love
C.W. Pruitt II
June 2003
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